mookRumorton's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[[LANCER] Harrison Armory]

Good implication of detail. I like the ones in the corners because they look big and silly.

WVDB responds:

I like my men big and silly

[BISMARK - Zone 2]

what a whale of a time... good use of photos

NinAcTi0N responds:

And I'm all for it :V Thank youu! Honestly experimenting with pictures is a lot of fun-

[Sheeple]

hiiii sheeple. nice texturing

OogooBoggins responds:

Thanks!

[Crimson-Tinted Glasses]

Do u remember meeeeee how we used to beeeeee

ericoliZZ responds:

and hold on to the dreeeeam

[Re-dos]

Those got an F- whaaaaaat

analworm18 responds:

Damn these biased motherfuckers, that girl Stacey always gets A + grades. The education system am I right?

[Rayman! Bwa! bwa-aRGL!!]

Nice motion! I played the Rayman Rabbids game when I was little and the only thing I remember was not being able to do the hammer throwing minigame.

Le-Radji responds:

those games could have been so much more if ubisoft wasn't ubisoft

[Chilchuck]

That hatching is really something

Dolokos responds:

Thank u ❤️

[Magolor]

fucking ROCKS. I like the hands and color scheme a lot.

UziJoestar responds:

Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you like it

[Assorted doodles.]

I like 3# a lot, and the Wheatley looks pretty solid to me; the main problem I see with him is the lineweight, which I think you could improve on in general to convey proximity and lighting better.
It's clear throughout where you did and didn't use 3d-construction, like with 4# and 6# where the fish guy's arm is pancaked, and the folds of cloth are sorta just flat shapes with wrinkle lines inserted instead of planes that bend and drape around an object (idk if that's the exact way to describe or think about it, but it definitely could use more form).
Overall good and fun sketches that show a lot of progress and study of fundamentals.

TheJudddman responds:

Thank you for the feedback! I'll get to practicing soon enough.

[A Smoke]

I like her design and expression a lot. You should hold down the pen more, i think this would look a lot better if the lines were more confident and continious.

TheBeakedRook responds:

I actually did debate relining it, but I decided not as I actually prefer the scratchy sketch look of some lines, but that's just me. It has a weird charm to me. Plus I barely do semi-realistic stuff lol