mookRumorton's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Yoo rave outfit Mel]

pretty jagged. try getting a more sideways grip on the pencil

NeanderthaLthebozo responds:

Thank you I have been trying to get less jagged lines

[Anton Chigurh]

needs sharper outlines

ZaazNG responds:

Thanks for the feedback, will keep that in mind :)

[A box]

not much to go off of, but its pretty asymmetrical

JaidenXL responds:

Yeah I'm practicing my shading for my art thanks for the reply though.

[1 Pokemon A Day, Day 555: Feebas]

i gotta be real your brushes look way too grimey/oily

Juicedupmangoes responds:

That's the type I like, yes

[Genderbent Rage]

has he ever felt the emotion of rage

ValerieHell responds:

yes but they're generally not very angry

[Big head]

roblox

Tapersteve responds:

Random ?

[Xploshi!]

the arms should be more connected to the shoulders

TadIsHere responds:

They did end up looking kinda weird. Thanks for the critique!

[lammmmmmmy]

where forehead

gemspiral responds:

no more

[Lost Soul]

Cool! I could imagine this jumping out at me on one of those old japanese horror websites. You might wanna put some blurring on the edges if you're going for a more ghostly/intangible effect.

Stupudding responds:

Now that you say that you're right I could imagine this on lomando.com or somthing like that.