mookRumorton's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Chilchuck]

That hatching is really something

Dolokos responds:

Thank u ❤️

[cog]

these are some great contortions.. she is fucking awesome

[Cosplay]

who does that sollux remind me of? some british person. good work.

[Shrimp?]

You're good at texturing for being blazed.

[cold ash]

I really like it, lots of atmosphere with minimal strokes, and the stylization on the fire/leaves is great!

[Magolor]

fucking ROCKS. I like the hands and color scheme a lot.

UziJoestar responds:

Thank you so much!!! I'm glad you like it

[Assorted doodles.]

I like 3# a lot, and the Wheatley looks pretty solid to me; the main problem I see with him is the lineweight, which I think you could improve on in general to convey proximity and lighting better.
It's clear throughout where you did and didn't use 3d-construction, like with 4# and 6# where the fish guy's arm is pancaked, and the folds of cloth are sorta just flat shapes with wrinkle lines inserted instead of planes that bend and drape around an object (idk if that's the exact way to describe or think about it, but it definitely could use more form).
Overall good and fun sketches that show a lot of progress and study of fundamentals.

TheJudddman responds:

Thank you for the feedback! I'll get to practicing soon enough.

[challenger]

That horizontal noise effect is fucking awesome. How did you achieve that?

[A Smoke]

I like her design and expression a lot. You should hold down the pen more, i think this would look a lot better if the lines were more confident and continious.

TheBeakedRook responds:

I actually did debate relining it, but I decided not as I actually prefer the scratchy sketch look of some lines, but that's just me. It has a weird charm to me. Plus I barely do semi-realistic stuff lol

[Far out]

wow. that's referenced

ChiHam responds:

Yes, I’ve seen suicide as a child.