mookRumorton's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Assorted doodles.]

I like 3# a lot, and the Wheatley looks pretty solid to me; the main problem I see with him is the lineweight, which I think you could improve on in general to convey proximity and lighting better.
It's clear throughout where you did and didn't use 3d-construction, like with 4# and 6# where the fish guy's arm is pancaked, and the folds of cloth are sorta just flat shapes with wrinkle lines inserted instead of planes that bend and drape around an object (idk if that's the exact way to describe or think about it, but it definitely could use more form).
Overall good and fun sketches that show a lot of progress and study of fundamentals.

TheJudddman responds:

Thank you for the feedback! I'll get to practicing soon enough.

[challenger]

That horizontal noise effect is fucking awesome. How did you achieve that?

[A Smoke]

I like her design and expression a lot. You should hold down the pen more, i think this would look a lot better if the lines were more confident and continious.

TheBeakedRook responds:

I actually did debate relining it, but I decided not as I actually prefer the scratchy sketch look of some lines, but that's just me. It has a weird charm to me. Plus I barely do semi-realistic stuff lol

[Far out]

wow. that's referenced

ChiHam responds:

Yes, I’ve seen suicide as a child.

[phoooooooooooo]

i think the smoke and hair to lesser extent in this one looks a little flat; it might look better if there was some outlining of the clumps that make it up instead of just shading. but great lineweight and posing as always.

Pistolewe responds:

I get what you're saying about the smoke, I'd probably go back and redo it if I could since I could've probably found a better way to illustrate it, but me personally I really like how the hair came out and I must not understand what you mean by "outlining the clumps that make it up instead of just shading" since I did outline the larger shapes of her hair and added shading to it. Thank you for the feedback!

Edit: just realized when you talk about the "clumps" you're probably referring to the smoke. That makes way more sense good god my reading comprehension skills are terrible I'm sorry LMFAO

[Pomelo Sona Ref]

this rocks. hes so expressive and well structured

[shark_week]

really really good colors i might sample some

[Street 95]

i love the dithering and exaggeration

[mind blowing stuff]

congratulations

[UNACCEPTABLE]

i think you need to get 3d printer and start mass producing these. possibly mail them to adversaries

CastleAlphy666 responds:

I would %100 DO THAT if I owned copyright of the characters. I would paint them, squeeze em and call themLITTLE Tom. maybe I'll make a recolor version and add them to a comic called Lemonchu. :D